tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7041804343600978883.post2285808090199921301..comments2024-03-28T05:34:42.670-05:00Comments on MAKE MINE MYSTERY: Pull Your Reader into the PlotMorgan Mandelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10118929301591850918noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7041804343600978883.post-11841684934012616962010-10-17T20:47:32.052-05:002010-10-17T20:47:32.052-05:00So true, the first sentence is a big responsibilit...So true, the first sentence is a big responsibility for a writer. Often it can make or break a book.<br /><br />Morgan Mandel<br />http://morganmandel.blogspot.comMorgan Mandelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10118929301591850918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7041804343600978883.post-10366293741208557602010-10-16T09:09:58.903-05:002010-10-16T09:09:58.903-05:00My condolences, Mike, if that's the best first...My condolences, Mike, if that's the best first sentence you've ever read.Jean Henry Meadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08146960738692672013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7041804343600978883.post-11650569621375866882010-10-15T15:54:41.602-05:002010-10-15T15:54:41.602-05:00Across the bar, a lean blond with a missing front ...Across the bar, a lean blond with a missing front tooth is massaging my tits with his eyes, and I get an idea.<br /><br />VOLUNTARY MADNESS, by Vicki HendricksMike Dennishttp://mikedennisnoir.comnoreply@blogger.com